PAPER                         MAX        EARNED

Content                        30	 30
  correct
  appropriate
  complete

- nice choice of level of detail etc.  Short and sweet, but enough
  detail so that one can see where the problems were and how you
  solved, or proposed solutions for solving, them.

Organization                   20        20
  overall
  sentences and paragraphs
  signposts for skim reader
  two audiences (investigator
    and instructors)

- overall organization (at level of sections and subsections) great;
  section and subsection titles also clue reader in on the scientific
  problem rather than the stat methodology (this si good)

- local organization (sentences and paragraphs) very good also

- intro functions as abstract

Format                         10        10
  layout
  typography

- excellent

Language                       10        10
  voice
  precise
  clear
  concise
  forthright
  familiar
  fluid

- excellent

Mechanics                      10        10
  grammar
  usage
  punctuation
  spelling

- initial double quotes need to be turned around (standard LaTeX
  newbie problem)

Figures and Tables             10        10
  judiciousness
  each discussed in text

- excellent

Appendix/es                    10        10
  judiciousness
  organization
  crossref'd from text

- not applicable

TOTAL                         100       100

OVERALL COMMENTS:

Yours was a difficult Stat Practice project, and not only did you not let 
it get the best of you, you provided real value added to the scientists 
(and impressed Bill in the process!).  Contratulations on a job well done.