The pdf of the page from the grant proposal we looked at in class is here:  http://www.stat.cmu.edu/~brian/764/grant-draft-page.pdf

A simple LaTeX file containting the paragraph that we were discussing in class is here:  http://www.stat.cmu.edu/~brian/764/long-grant-paragraph.tex

It seemed like it would be easy to get lost in that paragraph.  Please revise the paragraph so the reader does not get lost.

Submit a pdf if you can.